Ballroom of the Skies by John D. Macdonald
176 pages, Mass Market Paperback
Published
September 1, 1968 by Fawcett Publications, Inc
Being a genre author in the pulp era had a bit of a different meaning. While we think of Tony Boucher as a godfather of mystery and crime fiction, his impact on SF was almost as intense. In the case of Boucher, it is my opinion that he was a better SF writer. John D. Macdonald, on the other hand, was hugely successful as a crime writer with the Travis McGee books and most famously the novel that inspired Cape Fear. Writing in balmy Sarasota, his Florida novels drip humidity and tension.
He wrote three works of Science fiction in the early 50s, and it seems that he was chasing the market; had they sold better, it is possible he would be remembered for SF. The reality is many serious JDM fans have no idea he wrote in this field. In fact, recently Brian Evenson, who wrote for the Cape Fear series on Apple TV, told me he didn't know that John D. MacDonald SF existed.
I didn't either before I happened upon this book at Footnote Books here in Hillcrest, judging from the low price inside the cover (1.95) the annoyed shop owner thinks he priced it 25 or more years ago, and there it sat. Today he would price a rare JDM SF novel higher. Too late. IT was mine now.
For three years it sat on my TBR.
Ballroom of the Skies comes with a very helpful afterword by the author who gives some origin on the work. Already in 1968, he thought that his SF writing was lost to time, and he himself didn’t remember much of writing it eighteen years earlier. He found himself wondering what would happen next as he read the proofs for the 1968 paperbacks of both I have. “I confess to being particularly jolted by finding in Wine of the Dreamers that the Paris peace talks were still going on in 1975, that the Asians were quarreling with Russia about the orbits for snooper satellites, and that a substance was being advertised and sold to millions of Americans as a non-alcoholic, non habit forming beverage that would heighten the sensory response to such stimuli as a kiss for a sunset. I wish I could have equivalent prescience in personal matters.”
Wine of the Dreamers is the other SF novel reprinted at the same time. I am not sure if they are connected story-wise, but I saw in the wold the other day a hardcover that includes both novels and a third novella.
The reality of Ballroom of the Skies is that it starts slow, real slow. The first six chapters I was a little bored and lost. Now, having finished looking back at it, it makes a bit more sense. But the first time through I was bit lost. We follow a group of journalists in a post-atomic-war Philadelphia, and the dominant political force is Pak-India. I am not sure that alliance made sense in 1952, but today doesn’t. Everyone is chasing rupees.
There are little details showing that some of the characters have ESP powers.
“30,000 rupees, girl, let's see the illusion.
Jake took the money Karen handed him. He handed it to Miguel. “Here's 30,000 rupees, Mr. larner I wonder if you could use it to get me a spot where the article will get decent readership.”
If he's latent, wouldn’t that help?”
The journalist characters are chasing a story that another war is brewing, and it seems these folks with intense mental abilities are going to be important to the future. Knowing what is coming as I looked over the novel with an understanding of where it was going it felt stronger. I admit I didn’t get hooked on the book until page 68.
Chapter seven is when it gets weird, and the alien invaders arrive. It is not just that this out-there alien invasion concept is introduced; the writing and world-building are well done and interesting. “Ten parsecs beyond the outermost star system, the great ship rested; it had been built in space. No planet crust could withstand its weight, and thus it had never felt the tug of gravity at close range. It was the flagship for a full division. On the master control cube, a three-dimensional diagram of our galaxy, tiny red spheres showed the placement of each ship in the division. In this hour, it was a nervous ship. Quick flick of eyes. Lick of tongue tip across dry lips. Silence. The launch had arrived an hour ago. And at last the bell called all officers; they hurried to central assembly and stood in formation at attention
After five minutes the Earthling arrived with his cold and bitter eyes, a flat iron slab of his face, wearing his symbols of command. The prisoner was taken to the vast open space in the middle of the hollow square of the formation.
They said he could give you a rising agony with a mere glance, read your most secret thoughts, turn you into a mindless thing; the officer stood like statues.”
Look at some of the details of how this is written. I love the description of the huge ship built in space and has never felt the tug of gravity. The “Master control cube and a three-dimensional map. The way he describes the nervous ship with short sentences Quick flick of eyes, licking dry lips. Just great stuff here.
The best idea in the novel came in the back half. “This room is so constructed that it aids the projection and reception of thought. When you have learned to give your thoughts to each other you will find that together you can open the door.” I thought it was a very PKD-like (although this novel pre-dates him, a room that won’t open until the people inside can receive each other’s thoughts.
So how did JDM feel about it after 18 years? His afterword lays it out.
“My most signal satisfaction in rereading these two novels and in authorizing their reappearance was to discover that I had not, as I suspected, sacrificed story to message. They move right along. It had been so long since I have written them that my recall was fogged by fifty intervening novels. And so I had much ironic amusement in finding myself for the first time reading my own work with considerable curiosity as to what would happen next.”
After a rough start, the back of the half of the story was much more interesting. Ballroom of The Skies is not a classic work of SF, but as an artifact it is valuable. It is really fun to see a novel by a man famous for his crime novels play with ESP-soldiers, alien invaders, global conflict, atomic wars, and the like. Also, his commentary on future TV written as it was just being born in 1952, is very interesting, but I am saving that for a separate essay.
If you are a Macdonald fan, I think you should read this. If you are just interested in 1950s SF that weird pocket between the golden age and the new wave that is dominated by Cold War fears, then yeah, I recommend it as well. However, there are about two dozen fifties novels from PKD, Leigh Brackett, and Moore/Kuttner I think are better.
Cover of First edition:
Speaking of Tony Boucher this edition has a fold-out in the center









